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       code than write (even it's our own), focusing on descriptive programs helps.
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-      But you only have to look at even rubies basic blocks, to see that we have a way to go. We use Strings to represent
-      words and text, while we store data in Arrays or Hashes. If you look these up you may find a thread used for tying,
+      But you only have to look at even rubies basic blocks, to see how misleadingly language is usd. 
+      We use Strings to represent words and text, while we store data in Arrays or Hashes. 
+      If you look these up in a dictionary you may find: a thread used for tying,
       a military force, or a dish of diced meat and vegetables. So we have a way to go there.
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       And so what we consider good programmers, are people who are good at playing computer in their head.
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-      But off course we have the computer right there before us. So it should do it rather than us having to simulate it.
+      But off course we have the computer right there before us. Really the computr should do it rather than 
+      us having to simulate it.
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       What will come out of that line when we actually manage to put it into practise is unclear, though it is certain it 
-      will be easier to do and result in huegely more powerful programs
+      will be easier to do and result in hugely more powerful programs
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       Yet to get there we need better tools. Better tools that let us understand what we are doing better. Better models of
-      what we call programming, and by better i mean easier to understand by people.
+      what we call programming, and by better i mean easier to understand by normal people (not the computer simluators).
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